Dalvir Gill ਬਿਨ ਮੀਂਹ ਤੋਂ ਵਗਣ ਪਰਨਾਲੇ - ਬਹਾਰ ਆਈ Like · · Unfollow Post · Share · March 10 at 3:03pm near Brampton
Amarpreet Bhangu, Umesh Kumar, Sukhwinder Walia and 20 others like this. Dalvir Gill snow is melting..... March 10 at 3:04pm · Like · 2 Sakhi Kaur i was abt to say the same thing March 10 at 3:09pm · Unlike · 2 Vibha Uboweja Ray Lovely! March 10 at 3:09pm · Unlike · 2 Dalvir Gill Nisha, say it. March 10 at 4:39pm · Like Deepi Sair ਬਿਨ ਮੀਂਹ ਵਗਣ ਪਰਨਾਲੇ - ਬਹਾਰ ਆਈ March 10 at 6:21pm · Like · 1 Dalvir Gill Deepi Sair Sahib, pataa nahiN tusiN kis bhavnaa naal aapna version ditta hai, pr mera 5-7-5 taaN torh ditta naa March 10 at 6:40pm · Like · 1 Deepi Sair I tried without ton, i think its extra, if you hurt I will delete it I am very sorry and woundnt do it again March 10 at 7:06pm · Like Dalvir Gill not hurt at all ( note the grinning emoticon ) , do it all the time. Adjectives are preferred ( Even in English ) to form a continuity in the phrase and to avoid a haiku appear like three independent lines. In Punjabi I try to maintain the 5-7-5 format, when ever possible. March 10 at 7:12pm · Like · 1 Dalvir Gill your version has two "pauses", something we should avoid in a haiku. March 10 at 7:13pm · Like Deepi Sair I don't understand these logos at all March 10 at 7:14pm · Like Dalvir Gill Deepi Sair, here's a concise dictionary : https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10152259336270082&set=o.395117723895075&type=3&theater March 10 at 7:16pm · Like · 1 Sarbjit Singh March 10 at 7:18pm · Like · 1 Amar Chela ਭਾਈ ਲੋਗ ਹਮ ਤੋ ਇਨਕੇ ਚੇਲੇ ਹੈਂ ..ਕਿਆ ਬਾਤ ਹੈ ਭਾਈ ਲੋਗ ਮੋਲਵੀ ਕੋ ਨਹੀ ਪੜਾਤੇ March 11 at 7:10pm · Unlike · 1 Dalvir Gill https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10152636715795082&set=a.10150186791230082.424623.550445081&type=3&theater Photo Timeline Photos By: Dalvir Gill March 24 at 3:45am · Like · 1 · Remove Preview
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Like · · Unfollow Post · Share · March 10 at 3:03pm near Brampton
Amarpreet Bhangu, Umesh Kumar, Sukhwinder Walia and 20 others like this.
Dalvir Gill snow is melting.....
March 10 at 3:04pm · Like · 2
Sakhi Kaur i was abt to say the same thing
March 10 at 3:09pm · Unlike · 2
Vibha Uboweja Ray Lovely!
March 10 at 3:09pm · Unlike · 2
Dalvir Gill Nisha, say it.
March 10 at 4:39pm · Like
Deepi Sair ਬਿਨ ਮੀਂਹ
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March 10 at 6:21pm · Like · 1
Dalvir Gill Deepi Sair Sahib, pataa nahiN tusiN kis bhavnaa naal aapna version ditta hai, pr mera 5-7-5 taaN torh ditta naa
March 10 at 6:40pm · Like · 1
Deepi Sair I tried without ton, i think its extra, if you hurt I will delete it I am very sorry and woundnt do it again
March 10 at 7:06pm · Like
Dalvir Gill not hurt at all ( note the grinning emoticon ) , do it all the time. Adjectives are preferred ( Even in English ) to form a continuity in the phrase and to avoid a haiku appear like three independent lines. In Punjabi I try to maintain the 5-7-5 format, when ever possible.
March 10 at 7:12pm · Like · 1
Dalvir Gill your version has two "pauses", something we should avoid in a haiku.
March 10 at 7:13pm · Like
Deepi Sair I don't understand these logos at all
March 10 at 7:14pm · Like
Dalvir Gill Deepi Sair, here's a concise dictionary : https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10152259336270082&set=o.395117723895075&type=3&theater
March 10 at 7:16pm · Like · 1
Sarbjit Singh
March 10 at 7:18pm · Like · 1
Amar Chela ਭਾਈ ਲੋਗ ਹਮ ਤੋ ਇਨਕੇ ਚੇਲੇ ਹੈਂ ..ਕਿਆ ਬਾਤ ਹੈ ਭਾਈ ਲੋਗ ਮੋਲਵੀ ਕੋ ਨਹੀ ਪੜਾਤੇ
March 11 at 7:10pm · Unlike · 1
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